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Alderaans Atmosphere [2012] |
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Submitted by G-Fellow on 5 November 2012
Thx for the good comments Scout and Dr.Science.
@Scout your right, I must work longer on a tune, especially the hint listen to the tune after a week is 100% correct, in the past I made some tunes and the tunes was in the drawer good two weeks, when I did listen to it than I did asap re-work a bit of them and they was better.
Indeed could this tune have more different bass lines but especially the melody I like in this tune, mmmm but this is always a matter of taste. |
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Submitted by Dr.Science on 5 November 2012
I agree in most points with Scout. Although I think that your Sounds improved a lot in the past. And I also like this Music, even if it has some weak moments as Scout says.
I think you have the potential for really good sounds. Some of your music show that. But maybe you didn't find your style yet... Keep working! |
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Submitted by Scout on 5 November 2012
This tune has its moments and has some nice ideas and sounds.
Weakest parts in your tunes are the melodies and this tune is no exception.
Most of the time your melodies sound as random (false) notes and the story you want to tell us, gets lost this way.
Although I understand what you tried to tell here by creating a haunting setting in the intro and the choice of notes in the melodies.
Try not to repeat to much of the same pattern. Or if you have to, add something extra to surprise the listener.
Don't repeat for the sake of extending the length of the tune.
Don't release a tune too fast. Try to be critical, leave a finished tune for a week and listen to it again.
Ask scene mates (no family, wives/gf's because they like everything you do, even when it sucks but they don't want to hurt your feelings) to listen to your tunes.
Dane posts his work in progress stuff on Soundcloud, maybe that's an idea for you too. |
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Submitted by Matt on 4 November 2012
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Submitted by hedning on 4 November 2012
| G-fellow: Haha. Sweet. :D |
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Submitted by G-Fellow on 4 November 2012
| Your right hedning, but I'm nerd enough to upload a second version with the real Alderaan planet out of the movie. xD |
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Submitted by hedning on 4 November 2012
| Well. Who cares. The planet you used is not Earth either. I was wrong too, and your message is pretty clear. :) |
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Submitted by G-Fellow on 4 November 2012
Yes, damn, I have the wrong planet. I did look now at Star Wars Wiki and the planet there looks different. :(
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Submitted by G-Fellow on 4 November 2012
@hedning If that is the Earth, than they lied to me at the Star Wars page. :P
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Submitted by hedning on 4 November 2012
| Isn't that Earth? I see North and South America. |
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